Ok, so here's the deal, GSM......
Not that I didn't think you've improved from some of your previous work, Ok, BUT, I did thinkt he whole fight sequence deal, with the colored lines instead of Pico and Darnell ACTUALLY fighting was a little weak.
Who am I to say anything though, right? I mean, it's not like I have ever submitted flash before, so. Sorry if you thought that sounded bitchy, Man. 'Cause that's NOT what I'm trying to come off as. Just letting you know how I feel. Hell, even when you had old Jeeves (hang on a sec, NOT Jeeves, cuz the turtle flying was LOOKING for Jeeves, right?) flying through the air, he wasn't a freakin' colored stick thingy. Heh heh heh
You ARE really growing in your abilities as a flash artist though! Keep it up, GSM! Soon, you'll be animatin' like the big dawgs, 'round hyah! :)
................Take care, be good and make something else, please.period
:(Gaia:)